Wednesday, April 20, 2011

Haiku

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16 comments:

  1. Deja DavisApril 20, 2011 at 12:19 PM

    I dislike testing,
    although I try to do well,
    so I will not fail.


    -Deja Davis

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  2. Jeanine JonesApril 20, 2011 at 12:26 PM

    thanks

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  3. RamierApril 21, 2011 at 10:40 AM

    Snow is falling down
    Like roses hatching the ground
    That's coming to town

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  4. kearineyApril 21, 2011 at 10:49 AM

    Swimming in the pool
    is refreshing fun and cool
    watching all the boys

    -Keariney Minor

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  5. Ja'KehHApril 21, 2011 at 11:10 AM

    Motivation/Haiku

    Following others
    doesn’t make you cool even
    though it feels alright.

    -Ja’keh Harris

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  6. Ja'KehHApril 21, 2011 at 11:12 AM

    I like the rhyme scheme of the poems by the young ladies that were before me.

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  7. Deja DavisApril 21, 2011 at 11:47 AM

    - I like how Keariney and Michele/Ramier are rhyming and how they both have a kind of girly Haiku poem. I also like how Jakeh has an unrhyming; but, unique poem.

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  8. JessicaApril 21, 2011 at 11:49 AM

    As the rain falls,the
    wind blows, I hear the thunder
    Storm coming inside

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  9. JessicaApril 21, 2011 at 12:02 PM

    I like how Deja and Ja'keh word their poems, it has a good flow. Ramire and keariney have a good rhythm, and good wording.

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  10. TyannaApril 21, 2011 at 12:15 PM

    I can see the tree,
    It is brown and has green leaves
    It is very old.
    -Tyanna Warren

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  11. BrandiApril 21, 2011 at 12:23 PM

    My body is nice
    I think you should take a look
    because yours is too

    -Brandi Hill

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  12. rougui barryApril 21, 2011 at 12:24 PM

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  13. BrandiApril 21, 2011 at 12:25 PM

    Ja'keh I like your haiku a lot it tells the truth

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  14. rougui barryApril 21, 2011 at 12:27 PM

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  15. rougui barryApril 21, 2011 at 6:53 PM

    playing in the field
    on the swings and see-saw
    you hear laughter.
    -Rougui Barry

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  16. rougui barryApril 21, 2011 at 6:54 PM

    I like how Brandi and keariney wrote with rhythm.

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